Willful Dominance

By SubstituteWriter
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Copyright 2025 by SubstituteWriter, all rights reserved

[8,859 words]

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This story is intended for adults only. It contains depictions of forced nudity, spanking, and sexual activity of preteen and young teen children for the purpose of punishment. None of the behaviors in this story should be attempted in real life, as that would be harmful and/or illegal. If you are not of legal age in your community to read or view such material, please leave now. 

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Willful Dominance Part I

(Twin sisters plot to entice a 16-year-old boy into serving a “Day of Atonement” for crimes committed against girls. Eric could be facing a day of humiliation at the hands of these younger girls.)

Fifteen-year-old twins Mary Lou and Mary Sue began plotting their scheme minutes after overhearing their mother speak while on a conference call with her fellow Dommes.

“I do think that’s a great idea Edna, and I’d like to add that a day of atonement would be just the thing to keep our subbie boys in check and still honor Female-Led relationships,” said their mother. “I feel they should be kept naked all day, undergo a maintence spanking and generally crawl around on all fours doing things for us.”

The conversation continued but the girls had heard enough. They retreated into their bedroom and started taking over each other, pretty much saying exactly the same words.

“Okay, okay, I think we both have the same idea,” said Mary Lou, older by three minutes. “Let’s slow down and make plans.”

“Exactly what I was thinking,” Mary Sue said. “We’ll need a subject of course.”

Alpha females both, the twins were used to winning. The sophomores were starters on their high school (Pine Knotts) volleyball team, which finished the season with just two losses, though one of them was in the state final.

They were expected to start for the girls basketball team in the winter, Mary Lou a well-regarded point guard and Mary Sue a top-notch shooting guard. They liked to take charge.

Neither of them enjoyed the company of jocks, ego-driven boys or the smart know-it-alls. They knew they had to find a quiet, submissive boy for their plan. That’s correct, just one boy for the two girls, who shared everything.

They didn’t like any of the boys in their sophomore class and no way they’d try to train some pimply freshman. They were going to have to look at a junior, since seniors act like lords or earls or something regal like that.

“Remember that guy who talked about equal rights for women as part of that school-wide debate?” asked Mary Lou.

“Do I remember? I wanted to give the guy a big hug but he was nowhere to be found after the debate. He was cute too, not chiseled, but like a teddy bear.”

“That’s how I would have described him too, but what is his name?”

“That’s right, he didn’t give his name at the start. We’ll have to be on the lookout for him. I don’t remember seeing him at all.”

“Do you think he’s the one? Will we be able to convince him he needs to serve a Day of Atonement?”

“Of course we can, duh!”

End of Part I

Willful Dominance Part II

(In which the confident twins slowly draw Eric into their plans.)

Eric was just finishing his lunch by the oak tree on campus when he was approached by the sophomores.

“We have been looking for you everywhere,” Mary Lou announced, her hands on her hips.

Eric had to shade his eyes when he looked up at the girls. He barely made out their faces because of the sun.

“Do I, uh, know you?”

“I don’t think so,” said Mary Lou, who felt a twinge of power looking down at him. “You’re the guy who gave that great speech about women’s rights, right?”

“That’s right,” he said and tried to stand up but his legs fell asleep from sitting in one position the past half-hour.

Mary Lou and Mary Sue each grabbed him under a shoulder and helped lift him up. They smiled at his awkwardness as he took a step back from them.

“Who are you?” he asked.

“We’re admirers of yours,” said Mary Sue, watching him turn pink in the cheeks from her compliment. “We would like to talk about some issues if that’s OK.”

“Of course it is,” said Mary Lou, who gave him no chance to answer on his own. “I liked your speech but I can’t seem to remember your name. You’re a junior, right?”

“Yes, I mean, yes, I’m a junior. My name is Eric.”

“Well, I’m Mary Lou and this is Mary Sue. We’re twins if it’s not obvious. We’re sophomores.”

“Uh, yeah, I can see you guys look alike. How do you figure out who’s who?”

“It’s no problem for us,” said Mary Lou. “It’s more of a problem for other people. We’re mistaken for each other all the time. We try to dress differently every day.”

Eric nodded his head.

After a short pause, Mary Lou spoke up. “We have an assignment and you can really help us. Do you know what an ‘FLR’ is?”

“Not really, no,” he said. “Does it have to do with women’s rights?”

“Yes, in fact, it does. It refers to a female-led relationship,” said Mary Lou. “It means the man goes along with what the woman wants. It’s part of our assignment and you’re the only man we’ve heard talk about something like it.”

“I’ve been in that kind of a relationship for the past three years with my mom and sister,” Eric said. “After she divorced my dad, my mom asked me to help raise Kellie with her.”

“That’s great, Eric, but it also means between girlfriends and boyfriends and husbands and wives.”

“Well, maybe it’s about time. I mean, my mom works full-time and even has to work some weekends so I know what it means to balance a career and motherhood. I do my best to make it easier for her. My dad never let her work and I see that was wrong.”

“That’s so awesome,” Mary Sue said. “I knew we picked the right person to help us.”

“Yes, we are lucky to meet you Eric,” Mary Lou added. “That is, if you’re willing to help us with our assignment.”

“Do you mean like giving you advice on how I think a guy has to respect any girl, not just his girlfriend or mom?”

“Yes, that and more. I’d like you to join us and help us with our experiments. I mean, you’re so cool and all and you’re the only boy I want to trust right now,” said Mary Lou.

“So, I would also be like a subject of your experiments? I don’t really know f I have the time with school and taking care of Kellie at nights and some weekends.”

“We would love to help you with that,” said Mary Lou, giving Mary Sue a little wink. “It would fit right in with what we’re thinking. We could schedule a weekend when your mom is out of town and we’ll come over and help you with Kellie. How old is she?”

“She’s 10 years old and gets a little bossy sometimes. I don’t know if she would take to you guys, no offense.”

“None taken,” Mary Sue chipped in. “We’ve seen it all just between ourselves. I know we could handle anything, especially if you’re on board too.”

“Sure. I guess that would be OK. It would be easier if I could stay at home. When were you guys thinking about starting?”

“When is your mom gone for the weekend?” asked Mary Lou.

“Not this weekend but next weekend. In fact, she’s leaving on that Friday night and returning Monday afternoon. I’ll have to get Kellie ready for school. She does have a meeting with her acting class on Saturday. They’re getting ready to start rehearsing a play about Alice in Wonderland.”

“Great, then we’ll continue with the experiments next weekend,” said Mary Lou. “All you gotta do is sign this agreement form so none of us get in trouble. It just says we’re all volunteering for the experiments.”

“I guess so,” said Eric, who took the pen Mary Sue offered and signed at the bottom of the page without reading it.

“Don’t you want to read it over?” asked Mary Lou.

“Nah, I trust you guys,” Eric answered.

Mary Lou smiled at Mary Sue, as they knew the form gave them, or anyone else they designated, immediate full power over him until they completed their ‘study.’

“Thank you so much Eric,” Mary Lou said. “Meet us right after school right here and we’ll talk things over.”

End of Part II


Willful Dominance Part III

(Eric finds out he signed up for a real FLR for the next 12 days.)

When Eric showed up at the oak tree barely five minutes after the final school bell, he saw the girls were a little agitated.

“What’s wrong?” he asked.

“You’re late. When I say right after school, that’s what I mean,” Mary Lou said.

“OK, yeah, sorry I’m, late,” Eric said. “I had to ask my teacher a quick question after class.”

“That’s not good enough. According to our agreement, you’ll follow orders exactly as given.”

“Wait, I thought that was for next weekend … “

“Uh, no. The experiments began when you signed the agreement. You’re supposed to answer to us from now to the end of next weekend. It’s part of our assignment.”

“What if I get caught up with something?”

“You have a phone, text us and ask for permission,” Mary Sue said. “We have the same number.”

“We’ll deal with your tardiness later,” Mary Lou said. “Just give me your phone so I can enter our number. If we find out you have given it to anyone else, you will be very, very sorry. Understand?”

“Yes, okay, okay,” he said. “So, what is this meeting about?”

“It’s about giving you certain instructions,” Mary Lou said. “Like texting us the second you get home. If you need to do anything other than dinner and homework, you have to let us know. It’s all about the FLR now.”

“I get it. I can get through this. This should be interesting,” said Eric.

“Of course it will be interesting, and a lot of fun,” said Mary Lou. “You’re going to be great at it. I can tell. Just remember that you need to tell us everything you’re going to be doing, except dinner and homework. You already have permission for those.”

“Wait a minute, does that mean when I help put Kellie to bed and help my mom clean up? I have to do those things too.”

“Now that you’ve asked, we’ll give you permission for those things as well,” said Mary Lou. Her sister nodded in agreement.

“How about watching television?”

“No, you do not have permission for that,” said Mary Lou. “Instead, you will write out everything you’re thinking about this experiment and about how important we’ve become in your life; for a while anyway. We want to read it in the morning, before classes. This tree is our meeting place. Be on time, 15 minutes before the first bell.”

Geez, this is a little harder than I thought,” said Eric. “It’s like you have to know everything about me.”

“You’re starting to learn,” said Mary Sue.

“May I go home now?” Eric asked.

“Not quite,” said Mary Lou.

“We need to know you understand about asking permission to do anything,” Mary Sue said. “And we mean anything.”

“Like even when I’m going to bed?”

“I knew you’d be good,” Mary Lou said. “OK, now you may go home.”

Eric said hello to his mother and Kellie before heading off to his room, where he immediately withdrew his phone and began texting the twins.

No more than a moment after sending his text, Eric’s phone rang. Both girls said hello at the same time, each using their own phone.

“Thank you for doing what we’ve asked,” said Mary Lou.

“Is Kellie home yet?” asked Mary Sue. “We’d like to speak with her.”

“Yes, she is but she doesn’t know anything about the experiment and neither does my mom.”

“Doesn’t matter,” said Mary Lou. “Put her on, now.”

“Hold on … “

Kellie came on the line, with Eric sitting on his bed watching.

Kellie listened intently for a few seconds and then looked over at Eric. “Yes, he’s sitting on his bed.”

Moments later, Kellie turned to Eric and said, “Mary Lou says for you to go help mom.”

Eric shook his head and reluctantly left the room.

Several minutes later, Kellie came into the living room and handed Eric his phone without comment. Eric saw the conversation was over. He wanted to ask his sister what was said but not in front of his mom.

After dinner was normally television time but Eric excused himself and went into his room to start writing. He was a little bit nervous, a little scared, and also a little excited about being part of the experiment. He wrote about his feelings but when it came time to explain how the twins had become important in his life, he drew a blank.

He wondered what the twins said to Kellie and that made him realize they had control over everything for the next two weeks or so. So, yeah, they were important in that he couldn’t say no to them and had to ask permission to do anything. Did that mean going outside to play when he was finished writing?

An hour slipped past without Eric even noticing. He had just finished writing when Kellie knocked on his door and entered his room without waiting for permission.

“Mary Lou and Mary Sue wanted me to tell you a couple of things,” Kelile began. She couldn’t hold back a smile. “They said I could tell you when to go to bed tonight.”

Eric was stunned, his eyes growing large and his cheeks turning bright red. What were they thinking? Why would they do that? Let his 10-year-old sister dictate his bedtime? It was supposed to be the other way around.

He gathered himself. “OK, and did they say anything else?”

“Yes, but that’s all I’m gonna say right now,” she said. “Except you’re going to bed at eight o’clock.”

“Eight? You don’t go to bed until 8:30. That’s not right.”

“Sorry, big brother. Tonight, it’s eight.”

“Fine, just don’t get used to telling me what to do,” Eric said.

“If you’re a good boy I won’t have to,” she said as left the room.

Eric immediately turned back toward his desk and the paper he was writing for the twins. He suddenly felt vulnerable, embarrassed and, again, excited at what he might be getting into. He added a quick P.S. to his note.

Eric hurriedly turned to his homework. He didn’t have much time now that his bedtime had been moved up.

At five minutes to eight, he felt the presence of his sister in the room. He turned and asked what she wanted.

“You don’t have much time to get into bed on time,” Kellie said. “You still need to brush your teeth, wash up and go to the bathroom. Oh yeah, don’t forget you have to ask Mary Lou and Mary Sue permission, just like you have to ask mom for permission sometimes.”

“Oh God!” he thought to himself. “They really are serious. Girls are getting so bossy!” (It’s a good thing he kept that to himself).

Eric got out his phone and texted the girls seeking permission to get ready for bed and to get into bed.

“Good boy. Yes, you have permission to get ready for bed and to go to bed. Sweet dreams Eric. We’ll see you tomorrow,” read the return text.

Eric climbed into bed at exactly 8 o’clock. Kellie checked to make sure, took his phone and texted the girls. A reply wasn’t necessary.

End of Part III

Willful Dominance Part IV

(The twins teach Eric that saying ‘no’ is not a good idea.)

Eric decided to show up early for his designated pre-school meeting with the twins, his paper in hand. He was surprised to see them leaning against the oak tree.

“Nice of you to show up so early,” Mary Sue said by way of greeting.

“We knew you would be here a little early and we didn’t have to wait too long at all,” said Mary Lou. “Good going. Do you have your assignment for us?”

Eric handed Mary Lou what he had written, pleased with himself for his diligence.

“Where’s my copy?” asked Mary Sue.

“What? I thought you could both read the same paper,” Eric stumbled.

“You thought, huh?” Mary Sue said. “We’re going to add that to your naughty list and discuss it later. Meanwhile, please remember no matter what you’re asked to do, we must each have our own copies.”

“I’m sorry Mary Sue,” said Eric, lowering his head.

“How was it? I mean writing the paper,” Mary Lou said as she scanned over the first page.

“It was better than I thought,” said Eric. “It was kind of embarrassing to realize that I had given you all the power and I wanted to be honest.”

“That’s good Eric,” said Mary Lou. “I like what I see. But I don’t see anything about Kellie telling you when to go to bed.”

“Well, I, uh, assumed, uh, oh no,” Eric said. “It was the worst thing ever. I had to go to bed a half-hour before her bedtime. My mother asked me why I went to bed so early and Kellie told her because I was so tired. That made it even worse to have her excuse me.”

“Would you like Kellie to tell you when you need to go to bed, or even the bathroom?” asked Mary Lou.

Without pausing, Eric blurted out “No way!”

“Opps, wrong answer,” said Mary Sue.

“Yeah, that’s going to cost you,” said Mary Lou. “Kellie will get to tell you when to go to bed again tonight and you get to tell her the second you get home today.”

“But it’s Friday night! I get to stay up later on weekends.”

“Maybe Kellie will let you stay up but I doubt it.”

“Come on, please, I mean, she’s only 10.”

“If you feel that way, why not add Saturday night too?”

“But ….. Okay, okay, I won’t say anything else,” said Eric. “I’m sorry. But just tonight, OK?”

Mary Lou and Mary Sue looked at each other and smiled. “Nope, Saturday night too,” said Mary Lou. “Would you like to make it permanent?”

“I’d love to add Saturday,” Eric conceded.

“Great!” said Mary Sue. “For the rest of the school day, we’d like you to seek us out at recess and lunch just to say hello to us. Then we’ll meet here again right after school.”

“Terrific,” Eric said a little sarcastically.

Eric avoided further trouble, seeking out the twins when he was supposed to and rushing outside as soon as the final bell rang.

The twins gave him similar instructions for getting home, testing them, not watching television and listening to his younger sister when it was bedtime. Eric tried to sound happy when he agreed.

He greeted his mother and Kellie when he arrived home and asked to speak with his younger sister alone.

“Look. I’m part of an experiment with Mary Lou and Mary Sue and so I have to do some strange things. That’s why you got to tell me when to go to bed last night,” Eric said. “And we’re going to let you do it again tonight and tomorrow. Is that OK with you?”

“Like I’m your babysitter, right?” said Kellie.

“Yeah, something like that.”

“OK,” Kellie said. “I knew it had to be something like that. I mean, you’re always nice to me except that time you yelled at me for dropping my glass of milk.”

“Yeah, I did say sorry later on, remember?”

“Yep, you did, but I still get to add it to my list.”

“What list?”

“Never mind, that’s between me and your friends.”

A minute later Eric texted the twins he was home and asked Kellie for bedtimes the next two days.

They immediately called, asking to speak with Kellie, who took the phone and pointed to get Eric out of the room.

It was a short conversation.

Kellie called for Eric to come to her room.

“You were supposed to ask me if I would give you a bedtime,” she said, hands on her hips. “So, you get to ask me right now.”

Eric, sporting rosy red cheeks, sheepishly asked his younger sister if she would assign a bedtime for the next two days.

“That’s better Eric,” said Kellie. “I decided to take it easy on you tonight. I’m just going to make it eight o’clock again.”

Eric knew it would be something like that and although disappointed, he agreed. He also had to text the girls just before getting ready for bed.

Eric hurried through his dinner, explaining he had some old homework to catch up on. He raced into his room and started writing out his thoughts and feelings, which were getting a little intense. He thought the control issue was important because it gave girls confidence about being leaders.

He also thanked the girls for involving Kellie, who has started to develop a little confidence in her decision-making. She was firm but not vicious about setting his bedtime.

When he finished, he then copied the whole thing, word for word, so that each girl had their own copy. Then he set it aside for delivery.

Eric was punctual in texting the girls, getting ready for bed and then going to bed right at eight. Kellie took his phone and sent a confirming e-mail to the girls.

End of Part IV

Willful Dominance Part V

(Kellie starts to take a bigger role in her brother’s ‘experiment.’)

Eric was hoping to navigate Saturday in such a way as not to anger Kellie nor the girls. He texted a good morning to the twins and then hurried into the kitchen to start a breakfast of scrambled eggs, toast and orange juice.

Kellie wandered into the kitchen, yawning to bring attention to Eric that she was up later than he. Their mother arrived soon after and complimented Eric on how he set the table, poured the juice and had the toast and eggs started.

“He does seem to be much better after getting his proper sleep,” Kellie said, smiling at Eric’s pinkish cheeks.

“By the way, Eric, I would like to be dropped off at theatre practice 15 minutes early and I’ll need an extra 15 minutes after practice.”

“That’s fine Kellie, I can handle that.”

“Oh, and I will need your phone all that time,” Kellie added.

Eric was about to protest but decided to play along. “No problem, Kellie.”

“Great, thanks Eric. You’re such a good boy,” Kellie said. “Sorry, I meant to say good brother.”

Kellie needed the extra time to converse with Mary Lou and Mary Sue, both to get to know each other and to start making plans for the next weekend.

Kellie felt privileged that she was included in the planning. The twins suggested she could be in for a real surprise.

“You know, Kellie, more and more girls are taking charge of boys and making sure they do the right thing,” said Mary Lou. “Are you interested in doing that with Eric?”

“You mean, always getting to tell him when to go to bed?”

“Of course, and many other things too.”

“But he is way older than me.”

“It doesn’t matter,” Mary Sue said. “Girls just have so much more sense than boys and they should be in charge, no matter how much older Eric is than you. In fact, if you had a younger sister, she could be in charge too.”

“Wow, that sounds awesome! But what can I do if he doesn’t want to listen?”

“We’re going to make it so that he not only wants to but will be excited for you to tell him what to do.”

The twins filled Kellie in on many things regarding FLRs without using the term itself. They added a specific act she could try at the dinner table. Kellie couldn’t wait.

Eric, Kellie and their mother were in the middle of dinner when Kellie spoke up.

“Eric, you need to go to bed right after dinner.”

Eric coughed, felt a wave of embarrassment flow through him, and glanced at his mother, who was surprised by her daughter’s sudden announcement.

A minute of two elapsed before anyone spoke up and it was Eric who broke the silence, saying “You know, Kellie, I think you’re right. It hasn’t been the best of days.”

Their mother spoke up, “What is happening here? Don’t you feel well Eric?”

“Mom, Eric asked me to keep an eye on him. I think he might have over-extended himself today,” Kellie said. “I don’t mind looking after him. I mean, maybe it’s about time for me to look after him after what he’s done for me.”

“Why Kellie, what a mature thing to say,” said their mom. “I am certainly proud of you. Eric, you have been a good example for Kellie. I’m impressed.”

And so, it went. Eric had to agree or find himself in a mess. He was reluctant to reveal anything about what he had agreed to do with the twins.

Despite extreme embarrassment, Eric excused himself from the table and went to get ready for bed. Kellie followed him out of the kitchen and told him she would keep his phone for the evening and would text the girls when he was in bed.

It was seven o’clock on a Saturday night when Kellie texted the girls, who immediately called her, shared a good laugh, and made plans for Sunday.

End of Part V

Willful Dominance Part VI

(Kellie and Eric find out about "Day of Atonement" and why it’s important.)

Kellie was looking forward to meeting Mary Lou and Mary Sue. They seemed like pretty cool teenagers over the phone. She even made eight peanut butter and jelly sandwiches to bring for Sunday’s picnic at Emily Dickinson Park, named in honor of the famous poet.

Kellie kept hounding Eric to get himself ready, even though there was plenty of time to get there. She was anxious to get going since the 15-year-old twins said she was going to learn a few secrets. They had teased her with a few details about their assignment, which made it all the more exciting.

Kellie and Eric met the girls at the designated picnic table. The girls had some ham-and-cheese sandwiches, chips and Vitamin Water in an assortment of flavors spread out across the tablecloth they had lain on the table. They also brought paper plates and napkins.

After formal introductions, Kellie handed her sandwiches to Mary Sue, who set them in the middle of table. “How thoughtful,” she said. “Thank you so much for your contribution. I can’t wait to try one.”

“Kellie, your brother has told us so much about you, I feel like we know you already,” Mary Lou said. “I’ve enjoyed our phone conversations too.”

The girls were giving Kellie their full attention, leaving Eric to stand there feeling left out.

The twins finally invited everyone to sit at the table and dig in. Mary Lou sat next to Kellie while May Sue had Eric sit with her. Mary Sue grabbed one of Kellie’s sandwiches and bit into it. "Wow, this is a really good sandwich," she said, making Kellie smile.

The conversation mainly concerned school, homework and sports. Kellie said she and her brother sometimes played catch or kicked a soccer ball but that they weren’t so good at sports.

“That’s OK,” Mary Lou said. “There are other things that you are good at, like making sandwiches, and that’s special too!”

Eric mostly sat there, listening to the three girls getting to know each other. It was obvious they made quick friends.

“We’ve told you a little bit about our assignment and you’ve already contributed quite a bit Kellie,” said May Lou, who looked at Eric before continuing, “and you’ve done a great job. Mary Sue and I think you can take a more active role while the experiment continues.”

Eric started feeling weird again, having spells of both embarrassment and excitement. He couldn’t hide either as his cheeks went red and he started to sweat. Why does this happen? That was Eric, internally asking himself. Why do I get so many feelings when Mary Lou or May Sue start to talk like that?

“We’re allowing you to give Eric his bedtime through Friday,” Mary Sue piped in. “That way, we feel like we have a friend helping us out. On Saturday, when we come over to your house to run some experiments, you’ll get to help us a lot.”

While Kellie felt special, Eric didn’t feel so good. But he had signed the assignment sheet and had to comply with the rules, which gave the twins the right to assign Kellie as his caretaker for the next week.

“So, what happens Saturday?” Kellie asked.

The twins looked at each other and then nodded.

“That’s when we celebrate a ‘Day of Atonement,’ in which all boys are supposed to make up for breaking rules and being mean to girls,” said Mary Lou. “They must get punished, even if you really like the boy. We just adore Eric but he has to pay the price for all boys for the day. You like Eric, right?”

“Sure, he’s my brother and a good guy.”

(Eric starts to feel uneasy about where the conversion was headed. While he was being ignored by the girls, he still heard them talking and it did not sound good).

“That won’t matter on Saturday,” said Mary Lou. “You can like him and still punish him because of all the other boys.”

“Do you mean I get to punish him?”

“Let’s make that a maybe,” Mary Sue said. “He really did break a couple of our rules, so we do have the right according to Cassandra the Great, who invented ‘A Day of Atonement.’”

“But he did lie to me when he first told me about going to bed,” Kellie said.

Mary Sue and Mary Lou looked at each other and then over at Eric, who was avoiding any eye contact.

“That’s right, he did,” Mary Lou said. “As a result, you will get a chance to punish him. Maybe you can think of something for a few days.”

“When are you going to punish him? I want to at least watch,” Kellie said.

Mary Lou informed her they scheduled it for the time she would be at her theatre practice.

“Oh man! That’s not fair,” Kellie said. “You guys said I was going to help you guys.”

“Tell you what,” Mary Sue said. “We’ll save the last couple of punishments for when you get home. We may have a little surprise in store for you when we all come to pick you up.”

Kellie clapped her hands, yelling “Goody, goody” and settled down.

“I have kind of an embarrassing question for you Kellie,” Mary Lou began. “Have you ever accidently seen your brother naked?”

(You can imagine how Eric reacted).

“No, but I have seen him in his undies and pajamas.”

“Okay. We’ll let you know what happens on Saturday.”

The picnic wound down, trash was gathered and disposed of and the group said their goodbyes as they went their separate ways.

On the walk home, Kellie kept giggling.

“What?” asked Eric.

“I get to give you a time out and I can’t help but think of you without any clothes.”

“Oh Gosh!”

Eric had plenty of time to think about things, as Kellie gave him a seven o’clock bedtime and took his phone to send a text to the twins.

End of Part VI

Willful Dominance Part VII

(Eric’s letter gives his younger sister full power over him for the week)

Mary Lou and Mary Sue, 15-year-old twins, were reading over Eric’s latest essay on how he was feeling about his experimental new life. They saw he was making a smooth transition from independence to accepting a female-led lifestyle.

Eric stood silently at the oak tree as the twins read. He saw them nodding and giggling a lot. He had written about how embarrassed he felt at the picnic the previous day when Kellie and the girls were talking about the day of atonement.

He also wrote about how his embarrassment also made him excited and how he would try to follow all rules no matter how humiliated he felt. He knew that girls had the right to decide things for themselves. He also accepted that he needed to atone for the way boys treat girls. He wanted to set an example.

“I’m proud of you Eric,” Mary Lou said as she lowered the essay. “You are a very good boy.”

Her words produced even more feelings inside Eric, including confusion. He felt vulnerable in their presence.

“For the next five days, you’re going to look for opportunities to help girls at school and any other place,” Mary Sue said. “It can be as simple as holding a door open or doing a favor for someone. We need you to write down everything you do to help girls. You won’t need to write any essays until Saturday, the day of atonement.”

“You will write a letter to Kellie during your free time at school today,” Mary Lou said. “You will ask her to take more control of your daily tasks and why that is important for you and her. She’ll be in charge of when you do your homework and when to go to the bathroom. You’re also going to ask her to tuck you into bed. She’ll also be in charge of if and when you get to watch television. If she asks you to do anything, you’ll immediately do as you are told. It’s just for this week, so I expect you to do your absolute best.”

“Okay, I think I can do that,” Eric said. “This will be good for Kellie when she starts dating and meeting boys. I promise to do everything I can to help.”

“Visit us at lunch today and again, of course, right after school,” Mary Sue said. “Have a nice day.”

Eric, who was 16, started making notes about the letter to his 10-year-old sister during his first two periods and then began writing during his recess.

Eric was getting used to checking in with Mary Lou and Mary Sue at various times of the day and texting them when he needed permission. He even had the girls in mind when writing to Kellie, about how he needed to learn how to respect girls of all ages and how he had a responsibility to make things easier for girls and give them the confidence to become leaders.

The twins, who received the rough draft of his letter right after school, loved how he committed to this kind of a relationship and sounded sincere.

“I can’t wait for Saturday,” Mary Lou told him just as he was dismissed for the day.

Eric handed Kellie his letter when she returned from school and then sat down to do his homework. An hour later, Kellie checked in on her big brother.

“Eric, are you completely sure you want to do this?” Kellie asked, holding up the letter.

“Of course, Kellie, it’s for the good of the experiment this week and I do want you to grow up confident.”

“You’ll do anything I ask?”

“Yes. Kelli, I will do anything you ask.”

“Good. When you’re done with your homework, I want you to clean up my room and do the laundry. That will help mom too.”

Eric nodded. “OK, I will get to it as soon as possible.”

Kellie watched at a distance as Eric thoroughly cleaned her room, putting things away and making it look neat. Then he took all the hampers to the laundry room. During his down time, Kellie had him vacuum the living room and den.

By the time all the laundry was completed, their mother had arrived home and was surprised to see household chores nearly complete.

At first she thought Kellie had been doing the cleaning but then discovered it was actually Eric. Impressed at the cooperation between her children, their mother relaxed.

After dinner, Kellie had Eric get ready for bed but that he could stay up until 7, as long as he was in pajamas and reading a book.

And so it continued through the week, with Eric meeting up with Mary Lou and Mary Sue several times a day, looking for ways to help girls and following orders given to him by his younger sister. Bedtime was never later than 7 o’clock. Once he had to stand for inspection as Kellie checked behind his ears, under his fingernails, etc.

On Friday night she decided to give Eric a bath. She ran the tub, complete with bubbles and washed his back, arms and face. She let Eric clean everywhere else and dry himself.

Even though he was covered up with bubbles, Eric still felt exposed in the presence of his sister. Even though he had agreed to the conditions, he never got over having to obey his sister or feeling embarrassed about the ordeal.

Their mother had left for her weekend trip and Kellie started getting braver in her demands as a result. After all, she was the woman of the house now and had to keep Eric, whom she started thinking of as a baby brother, in line.

Eric was dressed in his pajamas for dinner and Kellie had him wear a bib and then spoon-fed him his meal.

Friday meant a 6 o’clock bedtime. Kellie wanted him to be fully rested for Saturday’s Atonement Day.

Lying in bed, Eric started to worry about what may happen. He had found a couple of stories written by Cassandra the Great and knew how she felt about nudity.

By the time he was asleep, Eric had unconsciously put his thumb into his mouth.

End of Part VII

Willful Dominance Part VIII

(The girls keep Eric on his toes most of the day as he serves his atonement.)

By the time Kellie retrieved her older brother from his bed on Saturday morning, Mary Lou and Mary Sue had been sitting at the kitchen table for a half-hour.

The girls smiled as Kellie led him into the kitchen and had him stand before them in his pajamas. He was visibly embarrassed to be seen this way by the 15-year-old twins. His head pointed toward the floor and he tried to turn him invisible. At the same time, he could not hide his excitement and his cock poked at the front of his blue-and-while pajama bottoms. He wore a pink top with flowers.

“Are you ready to serve your day of atonement Eric?” asked Mary Lou.

Without looking up, Eric whispered ‘yes.’

“Speak up,” Mary Sue said loudly.

“Yes, I am ready to serve my day of atonement,” Eric said.

“Look at us Eric,” said Kellie.

Seeing them staring back made it all the more awkward. He agreed to this before Kellie got involved and he thought he could impress the twins with his willingness to cooperate with this experiment. He didn’t realize Kellie would be playing as big of a role.

“Normally you would be naked the entire day,” Mary Lou said. “We’ve decided, all three of us, that you would spend the morning dressed as you are. There is one thing you need to do to show your sister how obedient you can be and that is to spend the morning on your hands and knees.”

Eric stood there, looking at his smiling sister and thinking about how much power she had over him from the week. She pointed to the ground and Eric, as humiliated as he ever felt, responded by going down on all fours.

“Good boy,” Kellie said. “I want you to learn some tricks for me so that I can play with you whenever I want.”

The twins were thoroughly entertained by Kellie’s ability to get Eric to bark, sit up and beg, roll over, play dead, fetch a ball without using his hands, lap water from a bowl on the floor and how to sit still with a cookie on his nose.

Kellie fell into her role like she’d been doing it all her life. She even treated Eric to a couple of cookies and a pat on the head when he followed her instructions.

It would have looked like an odd circus act from the outside. A 16-year-old boy playing a dog for his 10-year-old sister. With the twins laughing, clapping and urging her on, Kellie led Eric through his bag of tricks until it was time for her to prepare for her theatre practice.

She was picked up by one of the other mothers and Eric was alone with Mary Lou and Mary Sue.

“It’s time Eric, stand up,” Mary Lou said. “You’re going to remove your clothing and will remain naked the rest of the day.”

Eric stood up, hesitated a moment, and then took off his pajamas. He stood there, looking awkward, sheepish, his hands by his side aching to cover up his fully erect penis.

Mary Sue walked up to him and grabbed his cock and squeezed it a few times. “Not bad for a boy,” she said and began to stroke it, slowly up and down. Eric lost his breath and cringed.

“Not so fast,” said Mary Lou. “I need to examine that thing.”

Mary Lou gripped his cock and started looking it over, her eyes inches from his flesh. “Yeah, I approve.”

The twins stepped back and produced a list of chores for Eric. He had to dust and vacuum the television, dining and living areas, mop the kitchen floor with a toothbrush and do the laundry.

Mary Lou and Mary Sue followed him, supervising his activities. They stared at his penis as it quivered, bounced and flapped around.

“I think he really enjoys doing this,” Mary Sue said. “I think he appreciates our attention. He’s vulnerable, embarrassed and still trying hard to please us.”

“He knows how much we love watching him complete tasks for us,” added Mary Lou. “I’m sure he’ll do an even better job tomorrow at our house.”

After completing his tasks, Mary Lou said he would be getting a nice present. The trio went into Eric bedroom. The girls tied his hands behind his back and helped him kneel on the floor. Mary Sue placed a sleeping mask over his eyes, making sure to cover every angle.

An hour later, the two girls were lying beside each other on Eric’s bed, happily recovering from electric orgasms. Eric was still kneeling on the floor, his tongue savoring the taste of female juices.

Minutes before Kellie was scheduled to return home, the twins untied Eric and took off his mask. They led him into the living area and made him face the wall opposite the front door. They each took a couple of swats at his bottom to give him some color.

They were sitting on the couch when Kellie walked in and immediately noticed Eric’s naked butt.

“Oh my gosh you guys! He’s naked,” Kellie said to the twins.

“Yep, and we’re getting ready for the atonement spankings,” said Mary Lou. “You’re just in time. Take a seat and watch us.”

Mary Sue called for Eric to crawl over to them and then lay himself over her lap. She delivered 25 swats over his butt with varying intensity. Eric could not keep still and was close to crying when Mary Sue stopped, had him kneel in front of her, telling him to kiss each of her ten toes and to thank her attending to him.

Eric stood up, his hands behind his back, as instructed, and thanked Mary Sue. Kellie got her first unobstructed view of her older brother’s penis and thought it was “cute.”

Mary Lou had him get back on the ground and crawl over to her before laying himself across her lap. Mary Lou seemed to have a little more power in her spankings and Eric could not hold back the tears.

After Mary Lou was finished, she cradled him and whispered to him, comforting him for taking his atonement so well.

Kellie’s swats were tame compared to the twins but the embarrassment of being spanked by his younger sister (by six years!) made him feel like a small boy. It was even worse when she had him kiss her toes and thank her.

"It’s getting close to his bedtime, so we’ll leave you in charge Kellie,” said Mary Lou. “Remember that he stays naked the rest of the day. Whether he sleeps naked is up to you.”

After Mary Sue and Mary Lou left, Kellie turned to Eric, who was still standing with his hands behind his head.

“You’re such a good brother,” she said. “Maybe you should go back to the wall for a little bit and I’ll call to have a pizza delivered.”

End of Part VIII

Willful Dominance Part IX

(Kellie takes Eric to the twins’ home for his final day in the female-led relationship experiment. Eric meets the girls’ mother before completing a few tasks.)

Kellie was enjoying her time as Eric’s babysitter. Her confidence in her own ability to lead, direct and instruct grew to the point she no longer needed prodding by the twins.

That’s why she dressed Eric in her own pink bathrobe and had a rope around his neck when she rang the doorbell at Mary Lou and Mary Sue’s home.

“He looks so cute,” Mary Lou said after answering the door. “Come on in.”

Eric took one step across the threshold when he was stopped by Kellie and told to remove the bathrobe. She grabbed it out of his hands, leaving him stark naked in full view of all three girls (and maybe a neighbor or two) before closing the door.

“Excellent,” Mary Sue said. “You have what it takes Kellie. Our mom wants to meet Eric. Follow us.”

Their mother? Oh gosh this was terribly embarrassing for Eric, the 16-year-old high school junior. Not only was he naked in a strange house, but he still wore the rope around his neck and was being led by his 10-year-old sister deeper into the home.

Eric could not help but get hard at the thought of yet another female seeing him naked and a virtual slave. The 15-year-old twins loved seeing him this way: red-faced, his penis at full attention and looking utterly vulnerable.

Walking into the reception area, Eric couldn’t help but notice their mother standing in the middle of the room, a small whip in hand by her side. She was over six feet tall because of her black leather high heels. The black leather continued up her legs, so tight Eric could see her muscles flex when she shifted her feet. Even her torso was covered in black leather, a long-sleeved garment that also grabbed at her skin. He also noticed how much she looked like the twins. He was even more nervous when she pointed at a spot a few feet in front of her.

“Kneel down, with her hands behind your head,” whispered Kellie. “Show her some respect and keep your eyes down.”

That was all the prompting Eric needed. He went down to his knees, immediately feeling powerless and shameful.

“This is Eric I presume,” began their mother. “He seems to be in good condition and appears willing to obey. That’s good. Congratulations girls for your judgement in obtaining this specimen. My boy, I merely wanted to look at you for my own satisfaction. My girls, and your sister, seem to have done a wonderful job during their experiment. I shall not bother any of you the rest of the day … that is, of course, unless there is a reason to punish this boy.”

Their mother walked out of the room. Eric stayed right where he was, knowing he had not been given any other assignments.

“There’s cleaning materials in that closet across the room,” said Mary Lou. “You are to crawl over to it, grab the things you’ll need and crawl back here. Go!”

Eric waddled over as fast as he could. There was too much equipment to carry back at once, so he put things under his arms and in his mouth and slowly crawled back. The girls were mesmerized by his walk, not bothering to shade or avert their eyes at all.

“Start in this room. When Mary Sue decides it’s clean, she’ll direct you to the next room,” said Mary Lou. “Kellie and I are going to sit on the sofa and watch.”

That’s how it went for the other rooms he was assigned to clean. Eric felt completely exposed as he went about his duties. He tried to think about cleaning but was aware of his nakedness and how his penis seemed to always be so hard and standing up. Mary Lou and Kellie were whispering to each other and laughing. Mary Sue stood watch over Eric, sometimes guiding him, a hand on his shoulder, to placed he needed to clean.

Mary Sue had him clean two other rooms, with Mary Lou and Kellie the delighted audience. Mary Sue took her role seriously, standing as a guard over Eric.

Mary Sue eventually led Eric into the twins’ bedroom, a spacious room with two of everything scattered about. Mary Lou and Kellie decided to go to the kitchen for a snack while Eric went about his work, watched over by Mary Sue.

The room had clearly been cleaned already. There was not a thing out of place nor a speck of dust anywhere. Mary Sue led Eric to her bed, picking up a blindfold off the top sheet and covering Eric’s eyes with it. She then guided his head toward her sweet spot and he got the message.

Mary Sue was sweating by the time the session was complete. She instructed Eric to keep the blindfold on and left the room. A few minutes later, Mary Lou walked in and took hold of Eric’s shoulders. She guided him to her side of the room and again took the back of his head and brought it up to her own sweet spot.

Mary Sue was resting at the kitchen table, talking things over with Kellie. Mary Sue asked if Kellie ever thought of becoming the dominant leader in a female-led relationship.

Kellie said it would be nice to be in charge but that she didn’t really like any boys at her school. She said she’d like to continue with her brother though.

Mary Sue reminded Kellie that the experiment was nearly over and she’d have to negotiate her own deal.

By the time Mary Lou and Eric entered the kitchen, Kellie had pondered over several scenarios between herself and her brother.

After a long rest, all four of them had caught their breath.

“We want to thank you, Kellie, for helping us give Eric a chance to experience a day of atonement,” Mary Lou said. “For the finale, us three girls will give this boy a spanking, say 20 swings each.”

Mary Lou went first and did not hold back, bringing Eric’s butt to a deep red color. Laying across her lap, Eric came close to ejaculating. He didn’t want to find out what would happen if he did.

Mary Sue was next. She didn’t spank as hard but Eric was still concerned about losing his load.

It was Kellie’s turn and she used a paddle on her brother, making him squirm even more while across her lap. Eric struggled to hold back but he knew something was leaking and felt so ashamed.

Kellie noticed some liquid on her jeans after the spanking and asked Eric where it came from and what it was. The twins laughed so hard they both cried.

“It’s nothing,” Mary Lou said. “It happens when a boy really likes a girl and you already know Eric loves you.”

End of Part IX

Epilogue

The twins and Eric remained exclusive until Mary Lou and Mary Sue left for college, a total of three years. After turning 18, the twins may have expanded their sexual repertoire but we can’t go into it here.

By the time the twins went away for college, Kellie turned 13 and held on to her idea of still controlling her older brother, who was working as an assistant librarian at his old high school. He attended junior college and completed a certificate to prepare him for the job.

Kellie, who was about to enter the eighth grade, did become her brother’s full-time keeper for several years. She later added a few of her friends to join and help with her brother’s “care.”

One of them eventually assumed the lead role in a female-led relationship, which led to marriage. Despite the age difference, they lived happily ever after.

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